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Dear Mr.M,  
=>Correct! *^^*

As you mentioned last week, I think that you might open this mail monday next week.
How was your vacation this week?
=> As you mentioned last week, I think that you might open this mail Monday 
    next week.
    How was your vacation this week?


I hope that you had a wonderful vacation and I'd like to here you about your vacation later.
=> I hope that you had a wonderful vacation and I'd like to HEAR about your vacation later. 

During your abscence,
Mr.L(Head of Finance & Administration team) and I reviewedDE's requirements about e-mail issue.  
=> During your abscence,
Mr.L(Head of Finance & Administration team) and I reviewed DE's requirements about THE e-mail issue.  

Today I'd like to inform you about the result
because Mr.Lee also wants to keep the promise to reply till this week.
=> Coprrect! *^^*

Of course, It's resulted from a presentation to Mr.Lee.
=> Correct! *^^*

Please refer to the following Mr.L's instruction to me;
=> Please refer to Mr.L's instruction to me;

  1. DE site can use exchange server but we have to consider additional things.
     - How can DE site use  the electronic approval system ?
    - How can DE site use the Messenger function in OOO ?
    - How can SOO implement portal system without OOO?
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     →  In my point of view about this, I understand the requirements of DE site
          but I have to KR Site's requirements too.
=>→  In my point of view about this, I understand the requirements of DE site 
        but I have KR Site's requirements too
.

         (Please refer to the KR's requirements in the attached file)
=> Correct! *^^*

          I don't know how to implement the porta/messenger/approval system 
          to integrate DE and KR under SOOO's IT rule(architecture). 
  => Correct! *^^*
 
→  Therefore, Mr.Lee and I also recommend DE site to adopt another solution
=> Correct! *^^*
  
 → Please review this issue on KR's view and let me know your opinion 
      as soon as possible.
=> Correct! *^^*

Mr.LOO will decide the solution  among the proposed three solutions
like Exchange server/mOOO Server/Outlook GUI.
=> Mr.LOO will decide ON the solution among the proposed three solutions
    like Exchange server/mOOO Server/Outlook GUI.

2. Regardless of the decision,
   The discussed and proposed exclusive line must be establised between London and DE site.
=> Correct! *^^*

    Please check the proposed plan for this and progress hurriedly.
=>     Please check the proposed plan for this and progress ASAP.

   "    If it had started January when it issued, 
        It should be already completed " .... (Mr.LOO's mention)

=>    "    If it had started IN January when it WAS issued, 
        It should be already completed " .... (ACCORDING TO Mr.LOO)


OKay.

If you have any question, don't hesitate to contact me.
=> Correct! *^^*

Best Regards.
David
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