Good bye, my friend

[ Tom who is my guy friend and  is born from my hometown 
  is moving to Nepal in order to become a monk ]

=> [ Tom, who is my guy friend and  WAS born IN my hometown, 
  is moving to Nepal in order to become a monk ]

David : Hey Tom.
           I heard that you are moving to Nepal next week?
           What brings you there ?
=> Correct! *^^*

Tom: I don't know what to say.  I'm exited, yet, I'm sad at the same  time.
        As you know, I am always wonder if what kind of life is the best.
       Thus I decided to be a monk.

=> Tom: I don't know what to say.  I'm EXCITED, yet, I'm sad at the same  time.
        As you know, I always wonder  what kind of life is the best.
       Thus, I decided to be a monk.

David : I know that you've been worried about a life.
           but I didn't notice that this much your meditation is deep and concrete.
=> Correct! *^^*

Tom: I'm sorry that I didn't tell you because it's not confrimed till yesterday.
=> Correct! *^^*

David: Don't mind me.
          Could you tell me the reason why you select Nepal nevertheless
          there are so many religious houses besides Nepal.

=> David: Don't mind me.
          Could you tell me the reason why you selectED  Nepal nevertheless
          there are so many religious houses besides Nepal.

Tom: I'm with you.
        The reason why I decide to go to Nepal is a good place to pray quietly
        and to lead an ascetic life.

=> Tom: I'm with you.
        The reason why I decideD to go to Nepal is BECAUSE IT IS a good place to pray quietly
        and to lead an ascetic life.

David: I understand. Thank you for explaining it for me. 
          What date do you leave ?
          If you enter a religious house in Nepal, when can you have a kind of   vacation?

=> David: I understand. Thank you for explaining it for me. 
          What date WILL you leave ?
          If you enter a religious house in Nepal, when can you have a kind of    vacation?

Tom: I reserved the book a flight to Nepal next week friday 12:00
        I hope we will keep in touch.
=> Correct! *^^*

David: Oh. I shall miss you.
          Hmm. Tom why don't you have a farewell party with our friends at
         one day earlier when you leave.

=> David: Oh. I shall miss you.
          Hmm. Tom why don't you have a farewell party with our friends
         one day earlier when you leave.

Tom: That sounds good. 
         OK see you thursday next week

=> Tom: That sounds good. 
         OK see you Thursday next week