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Summary Report for pilot line OOO

Dear Dr.FOOO.
=> Dear Dr. FOOO,
How was your business trip from Korea to Germany?
=> Correct! *^^*
I look forward to your nice and peaceful return to your home.
=> Correct! *^^*

At the moment the cherry blossoms are at their best in my plant.
=> Correct! *^^*
I hope that you can enjoy the cherry blossoms next visit here.
=> I hope that you can enjoy the cherry blossoms ON YOUR next visit here.

Today, I would like to report the progress of MOO setup project.
=> Correct! *^^*
First of all, Let me explain briefly the status of approving process to you.
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   1) Report the plan of MOO project to President (Mr.POO)                      :  Mar.12, 2009
   2) Presentation on MOO investment to IRB(Investment Review Board)    :  Apr.3,   2009
      * Please refer to the attached file about the result of IRB 
   3) Report the result and summary of MOO project to President               :  Apr.8,   2009
   4) Kioff Ceremony of MOO project (planned)                                        :  Apr.15, 2009

Secondly, Let me explain the important things about the setup of MOO.
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    1) The core concept of pilot line MOO based the backward tracing from AOOO to COOO.
=> 1) The core concept of THE pilot line MES IS based ON THE HISTORY from
        AOOO to COOO.

        - It aim to trace with not BOO or Lot but COO
=>     - It aimS to trace with not THE BOO or Lot but THE COO

    2) The concept : data link
    3) The schedule of MOO setup for pilot line 
    4) The timeline of MOO for pilot line and mass production line.

Finally, at this moment I am wonder if it is enough for you to understand the plan of MOO in detail.
=> Finally, at this moment I am WONDERING if it is enough for you to understand 
    the plan of MES in detail.

If you need more information about this one, Please don't hesitate to contact me.
=> Correct! *^^*

At that time, in addition to this summarized mail, I'll be reporting to you soon via mySingle by translating my Hangul plan version (which was presented in investment review board) into English.
=> At that time, in addition to this summarized mail, I'll be reporting to you soon
    via myMail by translating my Hangul plan version
   (which was presented in THE investment review board) into English.

Best Regards.

DOOO